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Stand in the River of Blood...

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Media: Paints, pencils and ink pens.

"Stand in the River of blood, let it wash away your troubles as it washes away their lives"

The adult body of Akira, I have drawn her many times before, I think I might change her hair to silver because I really like how this design came out. I made her face and nose longer to give her a bit more character.
I love her curves, when she was changed by the monks her body was made in the image of a goddess. Her powers were also heightened when she was changed, as a child she did not posses much magic and now she is able to control it with a more mature body.

Edit// I uploaded a scanned copy, the photograph was too dark for my taste. :)
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First off, the colours look great. Is it watercolour? I have a really hard time getting solid colours with watercolours. But I digress. The shading is really good on her skin and on the dress. The hair looks nice, too, but I think you could have made it a little more solid--in the back I can see where the pencil was going and it's a bit inconsistent with lighter and darker flecks strewn about.
I also feel a need to point out that blood is really thick and rather opaque. Unless it's been watered down somehow you shouldn't be able to see her feet through it. Also, like most liquids, it does its best to lie flat--it might flow like that around her right foot if it's moving, but I doubt the huge dip in it on her left foot would happen. And if she's been standing in it at all it will probably have stained her feet a little even beyond where it is now. Blood is sticky. ...I'm...more finicky about blood than a hemophobe ought to be.

Her body looks nice and the dress looks good, especially the way it falls around her legs. However, it looks like the 'sleeves' are taped up under her breasts. If the fabric is meant to be transparent then you shouldn't be able to see her breasts any better than you can see her shoulders or her hips. If it's not meant to be transparent then you shouldn't be able to see her legs or shoulders underneath it.

Overall the picture looks very nice.

Um...please point out any bits of that that make absolutely no sense. I've not been able to speak quite properly at all today.

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